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Now Write! Fiction: Writing Exercises from Todays Best Writers and Teachers
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Now Write! Screenwriting
is dedicated to the splendiferous memory of
Maeve Moses,
a very compassionate and loving young woman,
a brave and positive soul who loved the arts and everything creative,
a very best friend and soul sister,
a woman who breathed life and joy into those she met
and who died way before her time.
A NOTE FROM SHERRY ELLIS AND LAURIE LAMSON
I n the summer of 2008, my aunt Sherry and I started talking about developing a book of screenwriting exercises. I had been impressed and inspired by watching her put together Now Write! (Fiction) and Now Write! Nonfiction , and suggested a third book for her series: Now Write! Screenwriting .
Sherry loved the idea and invited me to collaborate with her on the book. Working together as aunt and niece was an exciting adventure. Teaming up gave us the chance to share our love of screenwriting and to learn from each other in the process.
Our intention with Now Write! Screenwriting is to help budding and developing screenwriters hone and expand their skills. Thanks to the wealth of knowledge provided by our contributors, the exercises in the book are useful at almost any stage in a screenwriters career. We hope that readers will find it a valuable resource and that it will help them bring their craft to the next level.
To all the screenwriters, teachers and consultants who contributed exercises to this book, we thank you very much for sharing your expertise.
CHOOSING YOUR STORY
MARDIK MARTIN
Start with a Conflict
MARDIK MARTIN is a highly esteemed screenwriter, who penned MEAN STREETS, RAGING BULL, NEW YORK, NEW YORK, VALENTINO, and other screenplays. He has also served as an uncredited script doctor for numerous other feature films. His documentaries include ITALIAN-AMERICAN, AMERICAN BOY and THE LAST WALTZ . Hes also the subject of the acclaimed 2009 documentary MARDIK: BAGHDAD TO HOLLYWOOD. Hes currently a senior lecturer at USC and has previously taught at New York University. In 2006, the American Film Institute named RAGING BULL the fourth best movie of all time, and the Writers Guild of America rated RAGING BULL as one of the top 101 screenplays of all time. In 2008, Martin was honored with a lifetime achievement award from AFFMA (Arpa Foundation for Film, Music and Art).
T he biggest trap in writing a screenplay is the starting point. Remember, youre going to spend possibly a year of your life on a feature film script. So dont make the common mistake of using a theme, premise or message to start your story. Its easier and more effective to build with a conflict.
Lets assume a friend of yours sees a movie and tells you, I loved it. I completely identified with the main character.
Thats bull, in my opinion. Your friend did not identify with the main character. She or he identified with the protagonists conflict . Your moviegoer friend can never be that person in the movie, but she could have experienced the character s conflict, problem, or situation. Thats why she loved the movie. It was the conflict not the character that involved her in the story.
So, when you create a story, keep the characters conflict at the forefront of your screenplays starting point. In other words, dont obsess over a point you want to make or a theme, as Lajos Egri states in his popular book The Art of Dramatic Writing . He insists that the writer should start with a premise, such as Love Conquers All or Foolishness Leads to Poverty. The problem with the premise as a starting point is that you will inevitably create contrived situations and characters to make your theme become a story. But it usually ends up being phony or heavy handed. Youre hitting your audience with a premise thats obviously not based on reality but on a point you want to make.
A much better place to start is observing (or stealing) from real life. Collect anecdotes. You will want to observe real people around you and, more important, their problems, their situations, their conflicts.
Pay close attention to the people who cause those problems. In movies, we call these problem-givers the antagonists. You should study both the antagonists and the protagonists like a scientist. You dont make judgments. You dont want them to be tools of your theme. So become like an objective scientist and research the human behavior of your characters so they can be as real as possible.
EXERCISE
A good place to start a story is to look around at the people you know and observe their problems, and at the people who cause the CONFLICT. Maybe your best friend has a problem living with his mother. Or your sister is getting married to a wealthy man she doesnt actually love.