Barbara Baig - Spellbinding Sentences: A Writers Guide to Achieving Excellence and Captivating Readers

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Spellbinding Sentences. Copyright 2015 by Barbara Baig. Manufactured in the United States of America. All rights reserved. No part of this book may be reproduced in any form or by any electronic or mechanical means including information storage and retrieval systems without permission in writing from the publisher, except by a reviewer, who may quote brief passages in a review. Published by Writers Digest Books, an imprint of F+W Media, Inc., 10151 Carver Road, Suite # 200, Blue Ash, OH 45242. (800) 289-0963. First edition.

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Writing is an art: its medium is language.

Francis Christensen

So, you want to writeor to write better. Perhaps you dream of producing a novel or memoir so compelling that major publishers will fight over it. Perhaps you hope to have your poems accepted by a small press. Perhaps an essay in TheNew York Times is your goal, or perhaps you want to self-publish your work. You may be enrolled in an MFA program in writing; you may be learning to write on your own, or with the help of a writers support group. Or perhaps you are someone who has always yearned to write but has never quite dared to take the first step. Wherever you stand now as a writerwhether you are just getting started or have been writing for some timethis book is for you.

It will provide you with something you cant get anyplace else: a focused, classroom-tested training program that will teach you to write spellbinding sentences.

Sentences? you may ask. Why should I care about sentences? Im not interested in all that boring grammar stuff!

But this is not a grammar book; its a book about the power of words. It will teach youin a down-to-earth, practical wayhow to make that power your own.

You may not believe you need that power. You may have been told that what really counts in writing is story, or the ability to dig deep inside yourself and be totally honest about what you uncover. You may believe that if you can only come up with a riveting plot, some editor will fix all the writing for you. But the truth is that story, by itself, is just not enoughand professional literary agents and editors, being busy people, would much rather work with writers whove mastered their craft.

These days, most writing instruction focuses on large-scale craft: characters, plot, setting, and so onand, yes, you certainly need this knowledge. But if you cant communicate your story to readers, if you cant use language with such skill that readers have to keep turning the pages, then no one will spend more than a few minutes with your work. If you want to keep your readers spellbound, then you also need to learn the small craft of writing: the skills of choosing words and arranging them into coherent and powerful sentences. This book will teach you these skills.

As a guide to improving skills, this is not a book just to read: Its a book to do. You cant become a better violinist or tennis player simply by reading about those activities; you must put bow to strings or racket to ball on a regular basis. So it is with writing: If you want to develop your skills, you must practice. Theres real work involved. This work doesnt require a lot of fancy equipmentnot even a computer. And you dont need long stretches of empty time. What you do need is an eagerness to learn, and a willingness to put some attention and energy into writing practice.

In the pages that follow, I will be your writing coach. Like a violin teacher or tennis coach, I will show you how to develop your skills, provide you with exercises, and explain how to do those exercises. Like any coach, I will repeat important principles over and over, because repetition is essential to learning. Just as a tennis or baseball coach continually reminds his students, Keep your eye on the ball! I will tell you again and again to relax, to listen to your words and sentences, to pay attention to how professional writers use language.

When a professional writer is at work, his mind is busy making choices, choices about contentWhat do I want to write about? What material shall I use? Will this piece of writing be a poem or an essay? Who is my audience?and choices about languageWhat word do I need here? How can I make a picture so my reader will see it? Is this sentence too long? Some of these choices are the result of conscious thought, but many of them, especially in the realm of craft, are the result of training. Training is what creates professionals. With a baseball game on the line, for example, a professional center fielder can track a fly ball perfectly and make the catch, because his mind and muscles have been trained to choose the right moves. In the same way, when an experienced writer drafts and revises a piece, her mind can come up with effective words and sentence constructions, because she has trained the mental "muscles" that make those choices.

Even more important: Because they have consciously trained themselves in the craft of making sentences, professional writers have far more choices available to them. Without that training, aspiring writers are stuck in a rut: They use the same words, the same sentence structures, over and over, without even realizing it. This book will open your mind to a world of possible word choices and sentence constructions, so that you, too, can write like a professional.

The book is organized like my workshop, The Art of the English Sentence, which I teach in an MFA in Creative Writing program. Its chapters will take you, step-by-step, through information and practices that will increase your understanding of how words and sentences work. The two main sections of the book focus, in turn, on diction (the skill of choosing words) and on syntax (the skill of arranging those words into effective sentences). Having practiced these skills, well then explore some more advanced compositional techniques.

My approach here is both highly specific and generously open-ended. All the practices are designed to be equally availableand helpfulto both beginning and more experienced writers. So you can use them in whatever ways you wish, and you can keep returning to them over time, as your needs and desires change.

What I offer here is not a collection of rules (thats what grammar books are for), but a selection of basic tools that skilled professional writers use to craft sentences. I have not included every possible technique; rather, I have tried to present this material in such a way that any interested writer, beginning or experienced, can develop a solid foundation in sentence-making skills. With this foundation in place, you can easily go on to explore more advanced or experimental approaches. At the end of the book youll find a list of resources for further learning.