Story Design : Creating Popular Hollywood Movies
Copyright 2013 Richard Michaels Stefanik
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Richard Michaels Stefanik
RMS Productions Company
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$1Billion Worldwide Grosses
www.BoxOfficeMojo.com
(December 31, 2013)
Rank | Title | Studio | Worldwide |
| Avatar | Fox | $2,782.3 |
| Titanic | Par. | $2,186.8 |
| Marvel's The Avengers | BV | $1,518.6 |
| Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part 2 | WB | $1,341.5 |
| Iron Man 3 | BV | $1,215.4 |
| Transformers: Dark of the Moon | P/DW | $1,123.8 |
| The Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King | NL | $1,119.9 |
| Skyfall | Sony | $1,108.6 |
| The Dark Knight Rises | WB | $1,084.4 |
| Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Man's Chest | BV | $1,066.2 |
| Toy Story 3 | BV | $1,063.2 |
| Pirates of the Caribbean: On Stranger Tides | BV | $1,045.7 |
| Jurassic Park | Uni. | $1,029.2 |
| Star Wars: Episode I - The Phantom Menace | Fox | $1,027.0 |
| Alice in Wonderland (2010) | BV | $1,025.5 |
| The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey | WB | $1,017.0 |
| The Dark Knight | WB | $1,004.6 |
The analysis of the films in Story Design: Creating Popular Hollywood Movies is based on the versions of the movies distributed on videocassettes and DVDs.
The primary purpose of this book is to serve as an educational research resource for students of popular films, for teaching, and scholarship. These commentaries are published in compliance with the "fair use" doctrine, Section 107, U.S. Copyright Law.
THE WIZARD OF OZ: Copyright 1939 Turner Entertainment
STAR WARS: Copyright 1977 Twentieth- Century Fox, 1995 Lucasfilm.
E.T. THE EXTRA-TERRESTRIAL: Copyrig ht 1982 Universal.
SPIDER-MAN: Copyright 2002 Columbia Pictures Industries, Inc.
LORD OF THE RINGS: RETURN OF THE KING: Copyright 2004 New Line
JURASSIC PARK: Copyright 1994 MCA Home Video.
LORD OF THE RINGS: THE TWO TOWERS: Copyright 2003 New Line
FINDING NEMO: Copyright 2003 Disney Pixar
LION KING: Copyright The Walt Disney Company.
HARRY POTTER: THE SORCERER'S STONE: Copyright 2001 Warner Bros.
LORD OF THE RINGS: FELLOWSHIP OF THE RING: Copyright 2001 New Line
INDEPENDENCE DAY: Copyright 1996 Twentieth-Century Fox.
PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN: Copyright 2003 Disney
THE MATRIX RELOADED: Copyright 2003 Warner Home Video
SHREK: Copyright 200 1 Drearnworks LLC
MONSTERS, INC .: Copyright 2001 DisneylPixar
BATMAN: Copyright 1989 Warner Brothers, Inc.
MEN IN BLACK: Copyright 1997 Columbia Pictures.
GHOSTBUSTERS: Copyright 1984 Columbia Pictures Industries, Inc.
RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARK: Copyright 1981 Lucasfilm, Ltd.
AVATAR : Copyright 2010 Twentieth Century Fox, Inc.
TABLE OF CONTENTS
Story Design: Creating Popular Hollywood Movies
High Concepts and Loglines
Hooking the Reader with One S entence
The Unique Object and the Main Characters
Unique Object Protagonist Antagonist - Love Interest
The Climax Scene of the movie: the final battle between 29
the Protagonist and the Antagonist for possession of both
the Unique Object and the Love Interest
Plotting for the Audience Emotional Response
The psychology of the a udience: empathy and enmity
Character Development: Identification & Empathy
Personal Object ives: What Characters Want!
Character Motivation: Why They Want It!
Decision s: Making Hard Choices
Relationships: Between Lovers and Friends
Codes of Behavior: I s it the Right Thing to Do?
Transformations: Character Arcs and Changes
Personaliti es: Idiosyncrasies and Style
Supporting Characters : Friends and Enemies
Subgoals and Plot Twists: Creating Unpredictability
Story Objective
Concrete Objects
Personal Values
Subgoals and Subtasks
Strategies and Plans
Conflicts: Creating Excitement
Obstacles
Jeopardy
Self-Conflicts
Enemies
Relatives
Friends
Lovers
Physical Objects
Natural World
Supernatural World
Plots: Designing the Emotional Roller-Coaster Ride
Plot and Story
Events and Actions
The Inciting Event
Subplots and Subgoals
Plot T wists
Plot Organization
Plot Outline Worksheet
Plotting for Audience Emotional Response
The Emotional Plot Graph
Story: What's It All About?
Human Values
Virtues and Vices
Community Ideals
Basic Story Design
A-St ory and B-Story
Story Climax and Plot Climax
Scenes: Creating those Special Moments
Point of Attack
Crisis
Confrontation
Climax
Resolution
A Model Scene
Opening Scenes
Introduction of Protagonist and Antagonist
Climax Scenes
Resolution Scenes
Scene Construction Questions
Sequences: A Series of Scenes
Entertaining the Audience
Excitement
Surprise
Suspense
The Chase
Ticking Clocks
Emotions: Making the Audience Feel
Emoti on and Story
Emotion Words
The Cognitive Theory
Intensity of Emotions
Reactions to Events
Reactions to Actions
Reactions to Objects
Humor: Release the Tension & Make Them Laugh
Emotion and Humor
Humorous Dialogue
Humorous Situations
Humorous Characters
Cat egories of Humor
Megahit Movie Themes: Creating Universal Appeal
Analysis of Popular Hollywood Movies
Wizard of Oz and Avatar
Story Design Research Resources
STORY DESIGN
Creating Popular Hollywood Movies
This book is designed to show a screenwriter how to create an original story that has the potential of becoming a popular Hollywood movie. Screenwriters reading these discussions should want to create commercially successful movies. This book is written as a workbook, with assignments at the end of each section.
The first thing that a writer should create is the concept of the story. Will it be a high concept story? Next, the writer should create a logline for the movie: a single sentence description of the main character and the goal that the character is trying to achieve. Examples of high concepts and loglines illustrate these notions.
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