THE
EVERYTHING
GUIDE TO WRITING
YOUR FIRST NOVEL
All the tools you need to write
and sell your first novel
Hallie Ephron, book reviewer for the Boston Globe
and author of Never Tell a Lie
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THE EVERYTHING GUIDE TO WRITING YOUR FIRST NOVEL
Dear Reader,
I was one of those people who was sure that I'd never write a novel. Not clever enough. Not creative enough. No unique life experiences. I'd never come up with a good enough idea, and even if I did, I'd never have the stamina to wrestle it through 300 pages to a satisfying ending.
Then, one day, a wonderful story idea came to me and I decided to try writing it. I opened a new file, fingers poised over the keyboard, and right away I was stymied. Would it be I or she, past tense or present, and where oh where to begin?
Writing those first pages was like squeezing blood out of a turnip. A writer friend who critiqued my fledgling effort wanted to know: From which character's viewpoint did I think I was writing that opening scene?
Viewpoint? Scene? Were those things that I needed to know about?
It was news to me that I couldn't simply plunge into writing fiction using all the techniques I'd mastered over years of writing nonfiction. More bad news: All these years that I'd been reading novels, I hadn't paid much attention to how it's done. That was understandable because, as I would later come to realize, only bad writing draws attention to itself.
So, gentle writer, I hope this book spares you the kind of ugly trial and error that I went through in order to write that novel that you know you've got in you.
Sincerely,
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Acknowledgments
I'd like to thank Paula Munier, who made this project possible, and editor Lisa Laing, and all my writing friends who, over the years, have labored through my dreadful first drafts.
Top 10 Reasons to Write a Novel
You have a story you're bursting to tell.
You love reading novels and want to try your hand at writing one.
You have a passion for words and you love to write.
You've experienced something that you want to communicate to others.
The story you want to tell is too long and complex to fit into a short-story format.
You want to have the satisfaction of knowing you've completed a manuscript.
You want to try your hand at getting a novel published.
You're looking for a career that will last a lifetime.
You're looking for a career that can travel with you, no matter where you go.
You want to see if you can experience some of the fame, fortune, and prestige that successful novelists enjoy.
Introduction
IN 2008, MORE THAN 53,000 works of fiction were published in the United States according to Bowker, which analyzes data for the book business. Most of them were novels, and together they comprised more than one sixth of all the books published that year (including traditional print as well as on-demand titles but excluding audio and e-book titles).
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